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More Feedback from ‘The Bakery Assistant’

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‘most delightful way of describing your character’
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Excellent character development
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I’m funny!
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‘You are ‘on’ in this scene’

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Feedback from Critique Circle on my novel in process ‘The Bakery Assistant’

More praise for 'The Bakery Assistant'
More praise for ‘The Bakery Assistant’

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'a great metaphor'
‘a great metaphor’
I've warned my group that although Aaron and Claire are madly in love, their relationship has much turbulence, and a dive into catastrophe.   Needless to say they're not happy about it.
I’ve warned my group that although Aaron and Claire are madly in love, their relationship has much turbulence, and a dive into catastrophe. Needless to say they’re not happy about it.
loving BFF's Edie Jennings and Claire Fischer.
loving BFF’s Edie Jennings and Claire Fischer.

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loving the end of a scene
loving the end of a scene
fellow authors enjoying my work.
fellow authors enjoying my work.