Latest Feedback from ‘The Bakery Assistant’

I wrote 50,000 words in twenty-two days in the month of November, completing the NaNoWritMo 2015 challenge, and won first place in the Houston Writers Guild.


Last Wednesday I brought the first scene in the infamous ‘party scene’ that I wrote which includes characters named after two friends I’ve had since the eighth grade: Nikki and Corinne.

As with any first draft there will be some additions, subtractions, and spell checks that need to be done, but I did get some amazing feedback.  Here are some of the high praise that ‘That Bakery Assistant’ the tale of the tragically isolated Claire Fischer.


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