Feedback on Chapter 5 of ‘The Bakery Assistant’

I took part on #NaNoWritMo2015 in which you write 50,000 words in thirty days.

I wrote 50,931 words by November 22.  All I did was write.  I didn’t go back to edit, nor did I check my spelling.

I brought the first nine pages that I wrote on November 1 to my critique circle.  They had been lightly edited before I posted them, but I’m currently brain dead so it was rather difficult.

Even though it needs to be edited further they were very pleased with the story and dialogue in particular.

You can check out my #NaNoWritMo stats here

See an excerpt of my New Adult novel ‘The Bakery Assistant’ here

Some of the best notes I received from my critique circle can be viewed below:

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