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Feedback from my short story ‘Reunion’

I’m working on submissions for Inklings Publishing latest edition to the Eclectic series.  I still have some edits but one of the authors said is was one of my best stories.

Hopefully Inklings Publishing will love it as much as I do, but for now, here’s the feedback from my critique circle.

To check out what else Inklings has to offer, or submit your own short story for Eclectically Cosmic click here.

This is the author who said this piece was one of my best
This is the author who said this piece was one of my best
Comparing human interactions with food.
Comparing human interactions with food.

feedback

My work described using one of my favorite words: visceral.
My work described using one of my favorite words: visceral.

feedback feedback

A poetic bit of prose.
A poetic bit of prose.
This particular author loved this section of my story.
This particular author loved this section of my story.
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