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Feedback from Critique Circle on my novel in process ‘The Bakery Assistant’

More praise for 'The Bakery Assistant'
More praise for ‘The Bakery Assistant’

feedback from cc

'a great metaphor'
‘a great metaphor’
I've warned my group that although Aaron and Claire are madly in love, their relationship has much turbulence, and a dive into catastrophe.   Needless to say they're not happy about it.
I’ve warned my group that although Aaron and Claire are madly in love, their relationship has much turbulence, and a dive into catastrophe. Needless to say they’re not happy about it.
loving BFF's Edie Jennings and Claire Fischer.
loving BFF’s Edie Jennings and Claire Fischer.

feedback from cc

loving the end of a scene
loving the end of a scene
fellow authors enjoying my work.
fellow authors enjoying my work.
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